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harmonyangel

Four Captain America Drabbles

Jan 25, 2010 13:37

These are the drabbles I produced in pocky_slash’s writing chat on Saturday. They were all written in 15 minutes, so take that as a caveat. Three are Steve/Tony, one is Bucky + New Avengers.

Title: Ritual
Pairing: Steve/Tony
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 300
Summary: A ritual of clothing.
Notes: This is probably the closest to porn I’ve ever gotten this ( Read more... )

fic, steve/tony

Comments 15

cat_13145 January 26 2010, 07:36:36 UTC

Bucky would find the Avengers mess difficult as an army brat and Soviets. Steve at least came from that sort of enviroment, Bucky has probably always made hospital corners. Other 3 are sweet.

harmonyangel January 26 2010, 14:29:01 UTC

Yes, yes, that's exactly what I thought, and I loved the scene in New Avengers where Bucky just stared at the sink full of dishes in despair. It's a great little character note. I'm glad you liked these!

likeadeuce January 27 2010, 05:15:41 UTC

These are fantastic -- i love the last Steve/Tony one, particularly, and of course I love Bucky fuming over the dishes, and then his revelation at the end is amazing. Well done!

harmonyangel January 27 2010, 05:19:51 UTC

Thank you! I figured you'd enjoy the Bucky thing. I'm glad I got the last one on paper, too -- it's the fic that's been in my head for a month or two now, and I'm not sure I ever would have gotten it down in even this slight form if it wasn't for the writing chat. I'm glad you enjoyed these!

garrideb January 28 2010, 04:03:02 UTC

Ooh, I love all of these. Dishes was my favorite, with Bucky's blend of determination and wistfulness, and this really funny bit:

Only Jessica and the baby stayed in the apartment during the day, and Bucky didn’t want to imagine what she’d do to him if he suggested she clean up the place. He could only imagine the hell she’d raise at the implication that she was expected to be their maid. Even the baby would be staring daggers.

But of all of them, I'd like to see Impulsive happen the most. What a sweet image!

harmonyangel January 28 2010, 04:04:53 UTC

:) I'm glad you liked them! I'd love to see Impulsive happen, too. And thank you for your compliments, especially on the Bucky one -- I think Bucky and Jarvis could commiserate about Avengers mess!