[DGM] First Step

[harmony283]

Title} First Step
Fandom} DGM
Pairing} Allen x Kanda / implied Lenalee x Lavi
For} a1y_puff  to make her feel better after I gave her a rough translation of the spoilers for chapter 199 (which I don't suggest reading because they sound iffy to me....but they're also kinda sad, especially if you like Kanda and Alma)

Note: Typed up on skype so forgive me

Comments

[a1y_puff]

I'm pretty sure you already know what I want to say (since I've basically spammed you with hearts on skype XD) but yeah. I LOVE IT! I really love Lavi's voice in here. Really...witty, and amusing and--just <3

also, Link. Ha ha. I wonder how he see them, lol. I somehow can see him being all 'why me! *facepalms*' when Lavi said he looked ike he was about to resign to his fate. It's also nice to see him portrayed that way. Relutantly accepting, or something. XD

and of course, Kanda. I like tge idea of him catching on what Allen was doing but nit understanding why. Somehow, that sounds just like him XD

aaaaand Allen is simply adorable. Ans the ending is loooooove and Lavi's PoV made it even better. So yeah.

THANKS again for writing me this :D *glomps*

[harmony283]

Ahahah well...I'm glad you commented again regardless? >W< and well yeah XD I think he's the easiest for me to write when he's observing other people (so he actually has a way to focus his thoughts. *his everyday thought pattern would probably be VERY VERY hectic XD;;*)

Ah yes...I don't think he has much of a choice. Yes he could probably make a report on it, but I...don't know if he just thinks it's none of his business, or if the Vatican doesn't CARE so much about that as they do worrying about the 14th resurfacing :/

Mhm yeah I mean he's observant--he HAS to be as an exorcist and all. Doesn't mean he has to get some of the more complicated meanings (such as, y'know, if someone has a crush on him or not)

M'glad you liked the ending, and Lavi's...contributions <3

And you're very welcome! I'm glad I WAS able to write something for you XD *huuugs* (and I'll comment on your journal that I just now saw...after I get back *mom's calling me downstairs--and wtf I WAS JUST DOWNSTAIRS XD;;; )

[a1y_puff]

Link probably thinks it's none of his business, and as Lavi had said, he'd prolly think it's just a phase XD;

but yeah. That Link is so adorable and he almost gives off this Reever-like vibes watching those two XD;

aaand true. I love your Kanda (here and the RPs) that can actually know what's going oon but not WHY lol. Dork. *pokes Kandals cheek*

aaaww, I'm happy that you actually wrote a fic for me under--what, 2 hours? Even though it was kinda sorta a selfish request and on a whim XD *huuuuuugs*

p.s. *sees the comment below* ha ha. Isu tends to do that a lot, yanno. Rambling on a review/comment until you wouldn't know how to respond other than a huge thank you aand a big big hug 8D

[harmony283]

XD mhm yeah

bwahaha really now?~~

Kanda: *growls*

Well like I said I like writing stuff for people, selfish request or no (also...was it really 2 hours? o.o *did not feel like it. wow* XD) it was also good that I had inspiration and actually finished the piece xD *snuggles* I'd rather see you happy than angsting after all :/

p.s-I actually really love reviews like that XD they take time to respond to yes, but it makes it known that the person actually READ the chapter/fic which makes me happy >W<

[isumi_ilde]

First thing first, permission to friend you, ma'am? *is bricked*

And WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEE READING THIS MAKES ME GIDDY. Your Kanda is really one of the best I've ever read--just.. just so very Kanda. Lovely. And your Lavi, too--I really like how he talks and describes things; like, all the "of course" he throws in? Perfect. And I must say that the LaviLena bit was so much love. Wait, let me get this in a more... coherent way..

You've just made me love Lavi a hundred times more. From how he notices that there's something between Kanda and Allen, and how Kanda's always have a soft spot for Allen and how "Kanda's buttons just so happened to be insanely sensitive to a certain Moyashi's touch." *grins* The second scene in the battlefield was a nice change--I dunno, but I've missed reading the four of them together in the battlefield. That you threw in LaviLena observing Yullen makes it ten thousand times better. <33

[harmony283]

Yeah go right ahead XD *will add you back after answering this comment*

And that makes me happy~~ I've...been told that. He really wasn't that easy to write in the beginning (it's why I started writing him) though Lavi--Lavi's fun. And complicated. But in this he's just 'fun'. XD As for LaviLena *has nothing against the pairing, but it isn't her favorite* I can't see Lenalee paired with anyone :/ but it fit with what I was going for so why not? XD

[nayru774]

Aww, such a sweet story~ :3
I also liked the whole idea about Kanda seeing what's happening and not understanding it. That's just so like him, true, true. :'D
I generally love reading the whole "first step" thing when it comes to Kanda and Allen, so there was no way I wouldn't enjoy this story. :3
Yay for Allen for being brave enough to actually say/start something! \o/ And yay for Lavi for giving him the necessary push. :'D

[harmony283]

sorry this is so late! I've been having issues with LJ's alert system and --yeah just now was going back and reading through stuff--and saw this DX *feels really bad*

Heheh thank you <3
Mhm yeah XD I mean he'd get it enough to at least be confused by it, but he'd still need an explanation. *pats him on the shoulder*
I think First Step stories can be really cute...when done well. (some can be cliche and just--cringe worthy). Wanted to try my hand at it since I've seen a few before with this pairing and all XD

Hehe yes that's Lavi for you~ and yay for brave Allens XD thanks so much for the comment and sorry this is so late;; *has no idea how she didn't see this. I mean wat* -___-;;