Langidrik- Chapter 01 [PREVIEW]

[harmony283]

“What is free will?”

The ocean could never be tamed. It was a wild beast that lashed out at all corners of the globe, tearing away the land with force unlike any created by man, and it never spared anyone. Or at least it never should have. It was why the sailors worshipped it, loved it, feared it. They could never hope to harness its powers so they

Comments

[tossino]

It looks great! I tried to figure out something helpful to say, but... no luck. xD So... Yeah, bit it seems really good so far. I like the names and stuff, and the character seems loveable. :3

[harmony283]

and what the heck? The text is really really large O.o *it wasn't like that yesterday* Huh *might fiddle with it after she answers your comment*

I'm glad you liked it XD after 5 tries you'd hope the 6th would be the most successful, right? *laughs* I should probably link to the map since it's better laid out (but then the map might be redone. *just for the sake of making some stuff make sense* either that or some details in a chapter I've already written. Ah, heck I'll figure it out somehow XD)

I'm glad you like Lind so far~ Iezzi will be introduced very soon and methinks you might like him too XD (or that's the general consensus anyway)

THANKS SO MUCH for commenting though! I really appreciate it!

[tossino]

Haha, yeah, that might be needed. xD

Yes, indeed. XDD Ohhh, yes, you totally should. Just... do whichever, but a picture would be best. :D

I probably will~

You're welcome~

[hakasha]

oooooh, nice. like tossino said *read other people's comments for once!* there's not much to be said yet other than it definitely looks interesting. I like the way Lind is so attached to a few of his (more practical) belongings, because that's so very characteristic of someone with that kind of... job? life? XD (he's some sort of sailor, right?) And he seemed to talk out loud to himself a lot... acquired habit because of too much time spent alone at sea? XD

[harmony283]

I'm glad you think so, still XD (I'd ask what you liked--but this is only a small portion of the chapter so there's not much to 'like' yet). And yeah the only thing he isn't attached to is his hat XD simply because he has many back at his place. *and they're easy enough to make* he's a very crafty person XD (and yes he's a sailor)

Well that and it helps him calm down. just hearing the ocean is nice, but not when you're panicking ^^;