well I couldn't think of anything, and this at least fit (if not for just the CHAPTER title)
Heheh and I'm glad :3 I'm really proud of it too, like--you saw how I wrote it up alarmingly fast on Skype and all. So it just hit me out of nowhere. >.>
Mmhm and I like the beginning too because it's supposed to be somewhat vague *at least at the start* (how you're only supposed to see ED and--and yeah *that'll be important later*) yes I just gave myself another idea for this. WOO
hehe but thanks so much for commenting--even if you've already read more of this XD And I will~ I will don't you worry :3
*___* FMA fic. From you. Did I just win the lottery? XD
I like where this is heading. Where it seems to be heading. *___* I like what I've seen of Al so far too - worried for Ed, anxious and stressed, but a little angry at Ed too (it seemed?) and maybe partially at himself for not being there.
Anyway. Looks nice, am eager for more. This is gonna be fun. :D
...apparently so? XD it has me interested so far, so it's deserving of at least one fanfic from moi XD
Ahah well I do have more written *about 5 pages worth, this is roughly 2 and a half* and actually it cuts off right before you hear Al's thoughts on the whole situation XD but yes I was worried I didn't know where I was going, but I have enough to at least provide some fodder for it. *nodsnods* (and so far you're correct on your assumption for Al)
Hehee and I'm glad~ though I'd like to ask if I'm doing their characterizations okay? *thinks she is, but doesn't really know anyone who's into the fandom, so she's going by fanfiction, mostly* just...yeah I wanna try to get more of this up before exams swallow me whole next week, so XD *hopeful*
From what I've seen, it seems you're doing well with the characterization. It's a bit too early to make accurate assessments of it, however. or at least I think so? ^^" I'm kind of useless like that, haha. Oh, and good luck for yout exams! :D
Mm very true on that *nods* (it has to actually get to what's going on in the plot, I guess, to see if they're reacting in the ways they SHOULD *during it*)
and thank youuuu x.x I just want them to be o-over >.>
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-flutters-
Butbut--eeek~~
I love this more and more, each time I read it, y'know? Just---eeek. x3
Somehow, I'd have to say my favorite part (from what you've posted here) is the last four lines in the first scene. Just----eeeek~!! Again. xD
-shot-
Rite moar. I demand it. D
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Heheh and I'm glad :3 I'm really proud of it too, like--you saw how I wrote it up alarmingly fast on Skype and all. So it just hit me out of nowhere. >.>
Mmhm and I like the beginning too because it's supposed to be somewhat vague *at least at the start* (how you're only supposed to see ED and--and yeah *that'll be important later*) yes I just gave myself another idea for this. WOO
hehe but thanks so much for commenting--even if you've already read more of this XD And I will~ I will don't you worry :3
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I like where this is heading. Where it seems to be heading. *___* I like what I've seen of Al so far too - worried for Ed, anxious and stressed, but a little angry at Ed too (it seemed?) and maybe partially at himself for not being there.
Anyway. Looks nice, am eager for more. This is gonna be fun. :D
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Ahah well I do have more written *about 5 pages worth, this is roughly 2 and a half* and actually it cuts off right before you hear Al's thoughts on the whole situation XD but yes I was worried I didn't know where I was going, but I have enough to at least provide some fodder for it. *nodsnods* (and so far you're correct on your assumption for Al)
Hehee and I'm glad~ though I'd like to ask if I'm doing their characterizations okay? *thinks she is, but doesn't really know anyone who's into the fandom, so she's going by fanfiction, mostly* just...yeah I wanna try to get more of this up before exams swallow me whole next week, so XD *hopeful*
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From what I've seen, it seems you're doing well with the characterization. It's a bit too early to make accurate assessments of it, however. or at least I think so? ^^" I'm kind of useless like that, haha. Oh, and good luck for yout exams! :D
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Mm very true on that *nods* (it has to actually get to what's going on in the plot, I guess, to see if they're reacting in the ways they SHOULD *during it*)
and thank youuuu x.x I just want them to be o-over >.>
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