[Fic] Yummy, Chair, & Bond

[harmony283]

Crappy internet is crappy. Now I'm going to try replaying ToA so I can go and fill all those requests out, and have them marginally IC. Should be fun, neh, neh? But first a few more requests....

Again for the ABC fic memeY-Yummy

Comments

[hakasha]

the first one was very amusing. I can totally imagine Lavi's idiotic grin in that situation. xD

ooooh, that's mine! So amusing too! xD I just can't see Kanda ever doing something like that, it's so... so... I don't even have a word for it, but it's funny. xD

I have to admit the last one was my favourite, though. not because it was porneh (though that was nice) but because of how... alive and independent Crown Clown was. Petting Allen. The parts where it was evidently so were just pure awesome. like "Crown Clown as well, got a little tense, wrapped a little closer." and "The Innocence wavered for a moment, one tendril reaching out, around his neck--like a hold except--and --"I said stop--" and it deflated a little, enough to let Link get closer and--it was almost like a cat, "Okay--okay--um..." and he looked up at Link, apologetically, but the Innocence was still stroking his scar, as if apologizing for causing the wound, and really Allen didn't mind that." and "shivering again when the Innocence seemed to understand what he said,

[harmony283]

XD WELL yeah. It was funny to do XD

[pywen]

*drools* Holy shit.

The first one was well done, though I really didn't expect Lenalee to get involved lol. Though, despite re-reading it quite a few times, I can't understand the ending... Was lavi doing something to them? And how did Chomesuke end up half in his lap?

The second one was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing my head off. Kanda and Allen's bickering was priceless!

And the Crown Clown x Allen one... I'm out of words to describe how good it was. I really, really, really liked it. Think that you could do a sequel of this? Pwease? *puppy dog eyes*

[harmony283]

Hahaha XD

[pywen]

Simply... have him secretly crave Crown Clown's touch & embrace, but being too shy (not to mention very embarrassed) to ask for it? And Crown Clown responding to it?

Basically, Allen's very confused about his Innocence's sudden possessiveness, but he doesn't mind it at all. I only ask that again, it turns into another NC-17 fic lol. The last one was too delicious to leave it to just a hand job. *grins*

I hope that's not too in depth for you ^^

[harmony283]

Okay~ That sounds fine XD (though I dunno if crown Clown would be able to penetrate so...if someone were to walk in again *it doesn't HAVE to be Link* and I'm not very keen on Kanda, though it CAN be him who would it be?

*so answered this comment just so she could show off the new icon she goooot~* See it? IT BLINKS 8D

[unforgivingtime]

Oh wow! These are all really nice, especially the last one. I never knew Crown-Clown/Allen could be so... hot. I really love how you made Allen's Innocents so independent, acting on it's own while remaining non-human.. If that makes sense. Making it so possessive of Allen was a great touch too.
I see in the comments above that you may post some more of your DGM fics- Do you mind if I friend you? I'd love to read more, and quite honestly, your writing style is lovely. ♥

[harmony283]

*surprised someone commented on this again, but happy too*

I'm really glad you liked the Crown Clown/Allen drabble though! It definitely is interesting to try to give something inhumane human emotions while...keeping it inhuman. But I enjoyed the challenge, so it's all good~

And, well, if you look through my LJ I have a lot of DGM fanfics on here (obviously many before this post, and many after *though I've slowed down a bit now due to University and all*) so all I can say is have fun looking and of course you can! :3