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Destiny Wears A Disguise by danceswithgary

Mar 28, 2007 17:41

Title: Destiny Wears A Disguise (Part 3 of 3)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 24,710
Cover: (Cover #1)
Summary: Three men. One destiny.

( Destiny Wears A Disguise, Part 3 )

cover one

Comments 53

miche_connor March 29 2007, 12:45:30 UTC

This was absolutely amazing. I loved the richness of detail, and attention to character. *sighs happily*

miche_connor March 29 2007, 16:13:33 UTC

I'm happy that my obsessive researching paid off and you enjoyed the details. Thanks!

hils March 29 2007, 14:25:16 UTC

Ooh, this read like a Dickensian epic. Nice work!

hils March 29 2007, 16:14:42 UTC

Dickens and slash. Cool! Thanks for the compliment!

attaccabottoni March 29 2007, 14:48:46 UTC

Wow. That was pretty awesome. It's kind of like reading a mix of historical action/adventure and romance. The multiple character developments in the main Clex plot and the intriguing way all the changes played out and came together, plus all the cool roles the supporting actors, the different places in England, Europe and India, the descriptions of various period things and the termnilogies, establishments, and the language... there were nice touches that made this a well-rounded and very smartly done story. And the romance! The painful longing that pervaded their changing relationship... and Clark's many identities and Lex's many pursuits and responsibilities! The climax and the ending was grippingly dramatic. Gosh, this is on a par with the Regency stories/novels I've read. Really impressive. *applauds*

attaccabottoni March 29 2007, 16:23:41 UTC

I'm so happy you enjoyed all the threads I tried to weave together for this story. I fell in love with Fordham, Black Pete, Simms and Benton as well as Lex and Clark and I hated to stop, but I finally had to submit it for publishing. :-D

Thanks for your wonderful feedback!

norwich36 March 29 2007, 19:30:03 UTC

Oh, the ending was absolutely perfect. I loved the fact that Lex didn't recognize that Creighton was Clark--it seemed so much like the Superman/Clark distinction. And Clark's planning in this was wonderful to see--I especially loved the way he played Lana's aunt.

I really, really enjoyed this.

norwich36 March 30 2007, 00:35:19 UTC

I really like having an intelligent Clark who can hold his own with Lex. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!

danceswithgary March 30 2007, 00:32:06 UTC

I really love this story!

danceswithgary March 30 2007, 00:33:39 UTC

I'm happy you're pleased with it! :-D