Star Child by kayladie (Part 1 of 3)

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Title: Star Child (Part 1 of 3)
Rating: R (for sex/violence)
Word Count: 24,097
Cover: Cover #2

Summary: Alex Luthor's father is enraged by the latest scandal his son has found himself in, so he banishes him to the wilds of Kansas. On the way, Alex's party is attacked by rogue Indians, who are fiercely protecting the land that they believe the

Comments

[enderwiggin24]

grrr. how come that i want to kill lionel and victoria in every fic i met them *g* ?!?!
but i think, its so funny to sense a trend here, they make great villains ;D

[enderwiggin24]

Hee, Lionel and Victoria do make very convenient villains, don't they? Thanks for reading!

[paradox18]

I'm really enjoying everything here but the longer one's especially, this challenge really puts the sv characters in totally different scenarios and it's great when I can still recognise them and their personalities

[paradox18]

Thank you for the lovely compliment. I love long stories myself which is why I couldn't resist writing one.

[carolandtom]

I have enjoyed this first part very much; can't wait to read the rest. I love the setting of the story and the description of the characters involved. Great writing!

I'm glad there's more to read!

[carolandtom]

I'm glad you're liking it so far. I hope you enjoy the rest of it!

And ooh! I love your Tommy icon, I don't think I've seen that pic before, he looks like such a sweet little boy in it. :)

[jakrar]

Had to pause after reading the first section to tell you how much I'm loving this. So typical of Victoria to sleep with Lex, and then sell him out out of pique when he doesn't promptly fall at her feet to propose. So typical of Lionel to send his embarrassing and unwanted heir into a mini-war as a means of getting rid of him without needing to bloody his own hands. *growls at Lionel and Victoria, and hopes they get what they deserve* Fantastic meeting for Lex and Clark, and of course they've met before, even if Lex was too hurt and stunned as a child to remember properly. Love the way he does respond to Clark's touch, though; a part of him remembers, even if the rest of him doesn't...yet. *shivers with anticipation* On to section 2!

[jakrar]

Victoria and Lionel seem to be evol no matter what era they live in, don't they? I debated on whether or not I was going to have Alex have been affected by the meteor shower or not, but then I decided that I just love that scene in "Lineage" between baby!Clark and baby!Lex too much not to include it in my own story.

[tasabian]

Very exciting! The Lionel and Lex relationship corresponds perfectly with the modern version right down to Lex saying "Thanks, Dad!" as he comes into town. Love that Victoria is a schemer in any era.

[tasabian]

Yep, I love that line in the pilot; the exasperation in Lex's tone and expression is just so perfect.