Because You Knew by roxymissrose

Mar 24, 2007 13:27

Title: Because You Knew
Rating: R
Word Count: 8,001
Cover: Cover #1

Summary: Young Master Luthor is summoned to the family estate…

Notes: Thanks so much to Treetracer, and Arianstarr for your help! Any boo-boos or clunkiness is entirely my fault.

Because You Knew )

cover one

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taliosi_x March 25 2007, 03:56:40 UTC
what a charming story!

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ladydey March 25 2007, 06:41:54 UTC
*sigh* Beautiful! I loved the random meeting in the graveyard.

I love how honest you were with the realities of Lex's life - he couldn't just run off with Clark no matter how much he wanted to, but because of his healing factor, Lex had all the time in the world. Cool!

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treetracer March 25 2007, 07:11:15 UTC
My body shivers in delight at the memory of his mouth, but my heart, foolish heart, is gone with him.

I love how that line and this one,

My heart pounds painfully hard, and it takes me a moment before I can speak. “How, did you…did you hear my heart calling you?”

bookend each other. Great job, hon! ^_^

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complicat March 25 2007, 19:28:13 UTC
I really enjoyed this! Lovely and romantic and it went to places that I didn't expect

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teot March 25 2007, 20:43:22 UTC
Totally awesome! I don't usually like first person POV, but I pretty much adored it here. You should definitely try it again! *beams*

And it was *so* romantic!

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