Chapter (IV/V): Yellow tulips - There’s sunshine in your smile

Jul 05, 2009 23:19

Title: Chapter (IV/V): Yellow tulips - There’s sunshine in your smile
Pairing: Jaesu
Rating: PG
Warning: Character death.
Word Count: 260
A/N: i'm debating whether to change my last chapter. and and and i need to finish reading the pile of jaesu goodness! ask youtube to stop harassing me with shineeeeee. -starts singing 'replay'. (i know i'm a ( Read more... )

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jaesu_ryochi July 5 2009, 16:09:02 UTC
why o why?
/sadface/

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harkk July 5 2009, 16:16:28 UTC
DDD: blame the bunny! -points accusing finger.

don't hate me pwease. (inserts sadface)

anyway, thanks for reading and commenting my dear. <33

(i so need to read what you've written while i was away, 'manly needs' sounds uber intriguing. @.@)

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jaesu_ryochi July 5 2009, 17:03:44 UTC
uhm, really? -puppy eyes-

yes it is intriguing.
-looks around slowly, ebil laugh-

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aiko103 July 5 2009, 16:16:08 UTC
iaskfkjsbvhsdvhbvhg!!!!!!!!!!!!
TT__________TT
WHY!?
Susu can't remember anything!?
argh!
Give me tissue! I need it!

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harkk July 5 2009, 16:18:40 UTC
-stumbles and rushes to hand you gazillion tissue boxes. D:

still, thanks for reading and commenting dear. don't hate me okay? );

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aiko103 July 5 2009, 16:26:55 UTC
Thank you for the tissue TT_TT

but, but.. *pouts*
You hurt my heart *wails*
@_@

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harkk July 5 2009, 16:28:52 UTC
DDDD: aw bb, i promise you a fluff!jaesu after this okay okay? -huggles.

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weerainbow July 5 2009, 16:58:47 UTC
Oh you broke my heart...

"They said..."

...those words repeating just build the desperation Junsu is feeling because he doesn't know what they're saying to be true.

When love is so strong it makes such an imprint that nothing (even a broken memory) can erase...Jaejoong is still appearing at the end of his charcoal, his memory engrained in his fingers even if not in his mind.

I don't even know if it's worse for Junsu to remember, or to live wondering who this face belongs to that his fingers can't forget...

It's beautiful honey, it really is. It's giving me shivers...seriously <33333333

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harkk July 5 2009, 17:08:35 UTC
D: -pieces your heart together with ultra mega super effective jaesu love glue.

bb your comments are always so epic i- i don't know what to say anymore. and after reading what you said, it really struck me how sad this is. );

too bad his fingers can't sketch their past relationship. else it'd have been so much easier for junsu. /:

thanks dear, and you know why. ♥

(i haven't got around to read what you've written while i was away. guuh i swear youtube's a bad influence, i swear.)

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weerainbow July 5 2009, 17:31:21 UTC
*heart feels better stuck back together*

aww you know my comments are only a response to the way you write...I can't help it ;o)

love you <3

(youtube's dangerous, i'm convinced you get sucked into a time warp or something when you surf it...hours can be lost in what seems like minutes...)

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harkk July 5 2009, 17:53:53 UTC
♥ aplenty too.

and i lol-ed at your comment on youtube. how true.. and look! it's almost 2am now! O:

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itsplashes July 5 2009, 17:16:05 UTC
Oh my heart. D: Sorry, I'm still reeling from what happened. Maybe better comment when I wake up tomorrow?

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harkk July 5 2009, 17:54:44 UTC
take your time dear. (: sweet dreams! of me! :DD

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itsplashes July 6 2009, 15:48:41 UTC
/tries to explain how she felt

It's really like watching something unfold that you know is happening before it even began and then you're there and somehow, it hurts twice as much.;;;

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harkk July 6 2009, 16:18:36 UTC
and that, feels like some form of dramatic irony. /:i- idk what to say, your comment left me speechless. X:

thank you dear, for reading and commenting. ♥ aplenty. (:

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kimchee_07 July 5 2009, 17:52:14 UTC
He draws he paints he sketches he doesn’t remember.
The familiarity... scares him.
It's killing me!!!!!
U said.. last chapter will make me happy??? I doubt it. *point at ur warning once again*
I'm wondering.. r u planning to make both of them die?
I dont know which one I should be depressing more.
Junsu lost his memory and keep trying to figure out who's the man that he sketched or make him remember and face the reality.

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harkk July 5 2009, 17:58:18 UTC
don't die yet! D: heh but but i do see some glimmer of hope in the last chapter! -nodsnods.

hmm regarding the idea on both of them dying.. well, maybe and maybe not. ^^;

-sighs. i guess no matter how, both scenarios are a real sad sad situation. ); guuh stop making me feel guilty already! DDDX

still, thanks for reading and commenting dear. <33

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kimchee_07 July 5 2009, 18:17:00 UTC
Glimmer? ok, ok... I believe u. XDDD
Stop feeling guilty... *pat ur back for encouragement*
Honestly,,,, I like angst "slightly" more than fluff.. Huhuhu...
But I cant help it to be emotional.
But hey... that's mean ur story did give some impact to ur readers.
So it's a success.... Right? Right?
Waiting for ur last chap. ^__*

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