030. (fic) more superfresh stuff

[harinezumi_kun]

title: pool party
rating/genre: g; fluff, comedy, au
pairing(s): ohmiya
words: 956
summary: did you know ohno has a pool?
disclaimer: FICTION.
notes: so remember that thing i wrote for superfreshwk last week? and everyone was like "OMG SEQUEL PLZ". ...yeah, PEER PRESSURE, OKAY. enjoy :3

Comments

[minazuki17]

Yay for pineapple!!!
I like the way you write arashi^^
I'll be waiting for more

[harinezumi_kun]

thanks for reading! (^^)

[ayarashi]

waaaa i really love the two ~ :D
hahaha the Pineapple story made me laugh at the End, poor Jun xDDD hahahaha And of course i like the Pool Party i imagine Sakuraiba arguin about the Boat xDD hahaha it was funny ~
I'm waiting for Part 3 ^///^

[harinezumi_kun]

after all the failboating they've done in real life, i just couldn't resist :3

thanks for reading!

[babyrubysoho]

Yes, a sequel! And you're going to do more? Hurrah ^^
That first description of Ohno on the diving board was rather hot... (by the way, what are foam noodles?)

And the second one...short and sweet (poor Jun)!

[harinezumi_kun]

well, i can't very well just leave it off here, can i?? ;p at least, if it were me reading someone else writing this fic (whut, that sentence), i would want some closure. or, you know, making out or something.

and yeah, i had a lot of fun imagining this ohno...8D

(foam noodles, apparently more commonly known as pool noodles. i used to play with these all the time in my neighbor's pool)

re: Jun - he always ends up being That Guy in my fics. the one who is annoyed/disgusted/a bitch. wrryy, ilu jun-chan, really i do (~_~)

[babyrubysoho]

Oh wow, first time I saw those! They look fun...
I know, Jun fulfils that role in my fics too ^^

And yes, I want making out!! lol. Or whatever you choose to do...

[blufox_o7]

LOOKING FORWARD TO PART THREE.

And lol. Poor Jun. ♥

[harinezumi_kun]

THE THINGS I DO FOR LOVE, GOSH ♥

i always do that to jun. i really need to write some sort of jun-pairing, 'cause he just always ends up being the bitch in my fics :(

[coffee_hanjan]

YES! YOU WROTE IT! And a part 3? :DDDD

Besides all the Ohmiya goodness and bitchy!Jun, I also really enjoyed Sakuraiba fighting over their failure of a boat *cough*jikkenspecial!*cough* XD

The pineapple one is really cute too ♥

Thanks for sharing~:D

[harinezumi_kun]

♥jikkenspecial♥

this fic...yeah. mind of it's own ;p glad you're enjoying it! and thanks for reading :)