129. (fic)the gravity of you

[harinezumi_kun]

title: the gravity of you
rating/genre: pg; au (sci-fi), angst, romance
pairing(s): ohmiya
words: 4,150
summary: M5 is a backwater pit of a planet, and no one ever stays. Nino knows this, but he can't help hoping that Ohno will.
disclaimer: FICTION.
notes: written for spiegelaugen for the ninoexchange :D lots of inspiration drawn from "hitomi no naka no galaxy". this is

Comments

[neenashareefa]

[zero_shichi]

So heartbreakingly pretty.

[harinezumi_kun]

yeah, it was amusing to me how this sort of turned into a nino-birthday fic at the end XD;; and i wanted to leave the ending open, so you can imagine for yourself whether he goes or not :3

thanks for reading!

[racanai]

This story left me unable to write a proper comment to give it all the praise it deserves!
I like the whole setting of it, and because of the name of the city Agnes Obel's Riverside played in my mind while reading this. Such a fitting song for the atmosphere of this!

[harinezumi_kun]

aw, thank you ;_;

i...don't know that song! :D;; but i'll have to go look it up now :)

thanks for reading!

[g_esquared]

you are more than welcome! :D you already know how i feel about this but honestly, reading the final version made my love for it increase alarmingly. EXPONENTIALLY. ♥♥♥

[harinezumi_kun]

i'm glad you liked the ending ;_;!!! you are basically responsible for it, you know :D

♥ ♥ ♥

[harinezumi_kun]

HOORAY! yes, just yesterday ggumilgeoya commented about my not-showing-up-on-flists problem, and i had a kind of "oh wait, DUH" moment about how to fix it XD I'M REALLY GLAD IT WORKED!!

and i'm glad you liked the fic, too :3 i am dumb and forgot to comment on yours, but it was really wonderful ;_; and i was tickled that we both went with sci-fi XD