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The Hell's Spot - Chapter 3

Oct 01, 2009 14:50

Chapter 3.

He sat down heavily on the chair in his study and waited.

It was 9:55 am, only 5 minutes to 10. He hoped that the contact Aiba had sent him was on time. He hated to wait.

He put out his third cigarette of the day: one after leaving home, one in a queue on the Meiji, one in his study. He had even asked Mary to go buy him another ( Read more... )

arashi, the hell's spot, r, toma, translation, pg-13, ohmiya

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mm_nani October 1 2009, 16:08:35 UTC

Wanted to be first so hope I succeeded!

mm_nani October 1 2009, 16:38:48 UTC

hey Kage really made me nervous too

the descriptions were so elaborate and detailed! Amazing!

But I don't like Nino's 'attraction' to Kage!

harin91 October 1 2009, 17:24:54 UTC

Ahah, you've made it! First! xD
Nino's 'attraction' to Jun is... complicated. You need to read the other chapters to understand it, I think... Nino too is a bit confused xD
Thanks you and sorry for being late m(_ _)m

mm_nani October 1 2009, 17:33:41 UTC

Hey you don't need to be sorry

As much as I love reading this and as much as you making quick updates will make me happy if RL is taxing you don't push yourself!

Ganbatte for next chapters!

a_mbry0 October 1 2009, 19:19:44 UTC

Jun appeared! 8D
and oh i would have been nervous too if i were Nino! lol
thank you for sharing ^^

harin91 October 2 2009, 14:23:28 UTC

Oh, Kage you're a bad boy xD Stop make everyone nervous xDDD
And thank you for reading ^^

arashi_sugoi October 1 2009, 20:55:55 UTC

JUN APPEARED!~ <3 :D YAY!~ lol Nino's nervousness is understandable xD I would be too if i was him xD I like Jun's nickname "Kage" :D Its cool :D I wonder if Sho's one of the bartenders. And i don't find any problem with Nino's attraction...i don't think anyone can avoid getting attracted to Jun..not even Jun, just any other handsome guy. Being attracted doesn't mean that you are in love with them, it just means that you find the person attractive.
Looking forward to the next chapter!~ :)

harin91 October 2 2009, 14:21:23 UTC

Yes, you're perfectly right. I think Nino too intended this kind of 'attraction', because Kage also acts like somebody who want to be attractive. Besides, Nino is a complicated human being too so I don't think he can fall in love with someone at first sight.
Thanks you for reading, I'm doing my best with the translation ^^

Yep, Kage is a cool nickname... but is not the only one ^__-

thetoycloud October 2 2009, 12:33:49 UTC

Yey another chapter~ :D

harin91 October 2 2009, 14:22:23 UTC

Yeah! Hope you liked it ^O^