fic: What Was Left In The Box

Aug 11, 2009 09:17

Title: What Was Left In The Box
Fandom: Dollhouse
Rating: hard R
Pairings: Dewitt/Dominic. Slight Victor/Sierra.
Spoilers: “Epitaph One” like woah.
Beta: major thanks to irony_rocks for looking it over so quickly, if anything is left over that’s all me.
Disclaimer: not mine
Summary: It’s a whole new world. The problem is having to live in it. (AU for “ ( Read more... )

tv: dollhouse, character: laurence dominic, ship: adelle/laurence, !fanfic

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amzzzziohi August 11 2009, 12:19:42 UTC
Ah WOW!... Seriously, you've left me speechless and crying in the good omg that was so beautifully angsty and perfectly written kind of way! Wow. You absolutely nailed the characters and the angsty, emotional, full of hate and anger relationship of D/D was perfect!

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hariboo August 11 2009, 22:49:39 UTC
*hands over tissues* Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

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otahyoni August 11 2009, 15:27:29 UTC
Wow. Brilliant and perfect. This is my new canon for what we didn't see in "Epitaph One." :)

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hariboo August 11 2009, 22:52:02 UTC
Glad you liked it! Thanks for the comment. *G*

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meridian_rose August 11 2009, 18:29:12 UTC
Fantastic, thank you :)

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hariboo August 11 2009, 22:52:30 UTC
Thanks to you!

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hariboo August 11 2009, 23:05:25 UTC
I loved the first scene in the attic, because a scene like that has to happen for anything to move forward between D/D.

Exactly this! They need to face their respective demons, as well as the harm they've to each other before they can move forward, then I just had this image of Dom shooting up the Attic and then the scene almost wrote itself.

I'm glad you liked the Saunders/Dominic friendship. It sort of creeped up on me (like most of this fic) and I just love the idea now.

there are no happy, angst-free relationships in E1

Isn't that the truth! Reading it back, that paragraph almost felt like the crux of what the fic is about. About just how much Dominic needs to find something better than what the house is offering. Thanks for such a lovely review and the beta. Your name is accurate bc YOU ROCK.

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love_besos August 12 2009, 01:44:52 UTC
That was lovely. I think that's all I can manage right now. ♥

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hariboo August 12 2009, 16:40:49 UTC
That's more than enough. Thank you!

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