And the beginnings of Gabriel's obsession...possessive nature towards Mohinder begin to show. I like the use of third person (Matt) to point it out because it's something Mohinder can both dismiss but be worried about. He doesn't want to believe the worst of Gabriel but the argument seems convincing enough.
Mohinder gets right the point, eh? Looking forward to Gabriel's response!
*is newbie and quite obviously so* eeep! You have super-trusting/naive Mohinder down pat and I love creepy Gabriel! I will wait impatiently patiently for the next part. :D
Yay, a newbie! ;) Thank you for your kind words, glad you think I have trusting/naive Mohinder down, and that you're liking creepy Gabriel. I'll likely have the next part up sometime this week. :D Thanks again!
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And the beginnings of Gabriel's obsession...possessive nature towards Mohinder begin to show. I like the use of third person (Matt) to point it out because it's something Mohinder can both dismiss but be worried about. He doesn't want to believe the worst of Gabriel but the argument seems convincing enough.
Mohinder gets right the point, eh? Looking forward to Gabriel's response!
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