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Apr 10, 2010 23:41

The Family Business
by Harikari

AN: I know, I know. I haven't updated this in a long, long time. I apologize, I do plan to finish this thing. I'm going to skip the excuses and go straight to proclaiming here's chapter two! Hope you enjoy. If you notice any glaring flaws feel free to let me know.

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Chapter Two: Meet the Winchesters

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the family business, spike/xander, wip, supernatural, fanfiction

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bexmania April 11 2010, 11:03:20 UTC
Yay You wrote another chapter!! I was impressed you managed to keep the flow of the story and characters consistent after such a long break between chapters. Also Yay for evil!Spike.

The reason I enjoy this fic so much is all down to your characterization of Xander. To me this is the canon Xander was meant to be. I hope to see more in the future and congratulations on your return from Hiatus.

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hari_kari April 11 2010, 16:58:21 UTC
Thank you so much for all the kind words! I'm glad you think my characterization of Xander is okay, it's one of the things I worry over when it comes to this fic. Thanks again. :)

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hari_kari April 11 2010, 17:00:37 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind words! I definitely plan to keep up on updates this time. :)

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bubbysbub April 11 2010, 13:59:17 UTC
Hi there, really liking this, hope to see more. The idea of the Winchesters trying to conceal their demon hunting from Xander, who is trying to conceal his demon hunting from his family just tickles my funny bone. And this is done so well. Cannot wait to see some more.

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hari_kari April 11 2010, 17:03:43 UTC
Thanks so much! :D

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zowiebwalker April 11 2010, 14:39:14 UTC
I like this! No muss, no fuss, it's perfect! Also, like Spander in new settings. You've go Xan down pat.

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hari_kari April 11 2010, 17:07:28 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much for the kind words! I'm glad you think I've got Xander down, as I struggle a little thinking about how he would react in certain situations.

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anonymous April 11 2010, 15:15:11 UTC
I really, really like this story. And all your other stories. Thank you for letting us read them!

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hari_kari April 11 2010, 17:08:34 UTC
Thank you for commenting and the kind words! I really appreciate it. :)

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