Fic: "I Do" Tony/Tim, Adult

Mar 11, 2010 22:41

Title: I Do
Pairing: T2
Rating: Adult
Length: ~7200
Summary: Just an evening in, Ziva and Abby are over, wine is had, and conversations occur.
Warnings: Not really. Basically a follow-up to "I Promise", my first NCIS fic, set shortly after Aliyah. Can't think of anything particularly spoilery, really. (See Author's note). Some humor, sap, sex, ( Read more... )

rating: adult, fic: ncis, pairing: tony/tim

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harem_priestess March 13 2010, 08:53:15 UTC
Wow, thank you. Never been memory-ed! Yeah, not a word, but I felt the occasion called for a new one :)

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im_miss_barbara March 12 2010, 13:54:39 UTC
I loved this story, because It's Tony and Tim, but also beceause it's brilliant. I loved how Abby was all hot and bothered by them.

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harem_priestess March 13 2010, 08:56:52 UTC
I'm a Miss Barbara too, if that is in fact your real name :)

Thank you. And we all know Abby would be way preoccupied with her two boys getting it on. At least, I know that :)

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im_miss_barbara March 13 2010, 21:51:27 UTC
I'm not a realy miss barbara, more like a Tamara.

But I know that I would die and go to heaven if they made out in front of me.

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harem_priestess March 19 2010, 08:16:07 UTC
Well, then, nevermind! Hehe ;)

Die and go to heaven HAPPILY. Although, I personally would think of them making out in front of me AS heaven, so....

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kelleigh March 13 2010, 02:09:51 UTC
Oh, so much love for this. ♥ I love them portrayed as being so comfortable with one another - we see that at NCIS all the time, being in one another's personal space and their banter. Awesome job!

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harem_priestess March 13 2010, 08:59:12 UTC
The comfort thing has pretty much been there the entire time, and is one of my favorite things about the characters. Makes it all the more fun to watch, and think about when you need a cheering up.

Thank you!

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redvelvetribbon March 13 2010, 04:24:55 UTC
Very nice. I love the growing drunken tease..and then the backing off as the reality is they don't want to share each other. I like Tim and Ziva in the lounge. In my head they also screw each other long loving and tender and Abby wakes Ziva up to hear the noises Tom makes through the walls. Snigger

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harem_priestess March 13 2010, 09:02:55 UTC
Oh, totally. I know the story continued in my head, with Abby waking Ziva and the two of them crawling into the closet that backs up against the guys' room and listening, muffling giggles in pillows or whatever.

Thanks for the read and review. I'm a big fan of yours :)

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jack_infinitude March 13 2010, 06:05:48 UTC
Awww! Loved the beginning sex scene, and...pretty much everything Velvet already said. Nice job. <3

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harem_priestess March 13 2010, 09:05:18 UTC
Yeah, that scene was kind of fun. As was pretty much everything else. :)

Thanks for the r/r. And again, for the quickie lesson on icon making. Can't thank you enough apparently :)

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