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HT 100 Oz Flash Fiction Challenge #1 - Forgiveness

Feb 01, 2004 01:25

I started about four different stories for this challenge, but either ended up hating them, or realizing halfway through they were going to be way too long. I started this one yesterday and just finished it, about 2:00 a.m. I hope there's not too many mistakes. I'm tired.A sharp tap on his shoulder. "You got a visitor, Keller. One of your exes ( Read more... )

flashfic ch 001 forgiveness, w: lisacali

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rowanfairchild February 4 2004, 20:24:40 UTC

Lisa-- sorry it's taken me so long to comment on this (*&$%# 'zine story! *g*) Anyway, wow, I loved this. Especially that super kicker of an ending -- unsettling and perfect. Really good stuff.

Re: lisacali February 7 2004, 05:49:04 UTC

You've been great for ego today! I was kind of excited myself when I thought of that ending. lol! Thanks!