HT100 #24- Cut: Mouth to Mouth

Sep 13, 2003 19:42

This is Keller lamenting over the dead body of Barlog in Revenge is SweetIt really is too easy to kill ( Read more... )

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rileyc September 14 2003, 15:57:21 UTC
*shiver* And right on the money. Good one, Mav.

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maverick4oz September 20 2003, 18:03:21 UTC
I don't know what it is about me and Keller killing people. You think I should seek help?

Thanks Rebecca.

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rileyc September 20 2003, 20:15:15 UTC
If I thought that was a serious question I might have to borrow those ass-kicking boots of yours. *g*

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alinewrites September 18 2003, 11:27:47 UTC
This one is just great, Mav.I can so hear Keller! and it's so dark! I love it

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maverick4oz September 20 2003, 18:04:34 UTC
Thanks Aline. I tried to write a happy one and couldn't. Sometimes, you've just got to let the dark muses out.

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lisacali September 19 2003, 05:47:39 UTC
Course if you could have done that, it wouldn’t have been so easy to get you on your knees with your mouth wrapped round my dick. Lamb to the slaughter baby.

*So* Chris! Great scene to finish out, and great job in doing it!

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maverick4oz September 20 2003, 18:05:40 UTC
Thanks Lisa. Great challenge you issued. I wasn't sure if this really fit the bill because it's all internal, but then I started thinking about what Meloni could say with just his facial expressions in a scene like this. Glad you liked it.

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