HT100 Challenge #21-Boob Tube: C.S.I.

[actizera]

“C.S.fuckin’I. What bullshit. Anyone dumb enough to spatter blood everywhere like that deserves to be caught

Comments

[maverick4oz]

Just the right balance of *everything*. I love the underlying darkness of this, especially that Toby *knows* why Keller knows this stuff. Great stuff, A.

[actizera]

Thanks, Mav! I always wonder exactly how Toby managed to assimilate what he knew (or suspected) about Chris's past. Hey, that gives me an idea for a new Oz Interaction topic... *g*

[alinewrites]

I love it, it's dark and tense and nothing's said but everything's understood. Just great.

[actizera]

Thanks, Aline! I'm glad what I was trying to do here came across; I'm never sure with these 100-word things. lol

[catheights]

Oooh, this one gave me a shiver. The dialogue is excellent, and I love the darker meaning hidden behind that dialogue. Wonderful drabble!

[actizera]

Thank you, Cat! I'm glad you liked it! I often feel like I'm able to pack more into fewer words if I can manage to do it with dialogue. I can't quite explain why that is, though, and I don't seem to do it very often. lol

[lisacali]

You know, if we were watching this, we'd be able to see so much by their expression. You've managed to let us read between the lines so well, it's like we *are* seeing it. Wonderful.

[actizera]

Thanks! I really had a vivid picture in my head of how Toby would be looking right then, but I was having a lot of trouble getting everything across in 100 words. I'm glad it ended up working for you!