Comments | hardtime100: HT100 Challenge #14 - Blast from the Past

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HT100 Challenge #14 - Blast from the Past - Snap

Jul 06, 2003 08:45

I was thinking of fleshing this one out more into a longer scene, but here is the 100 word version. (Man it's tough to make it exactly 100 words!)“I’ll make sure nothing of yours snaps ( Read more... )

w: fictionbya, ch 014 blast from the past

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rowanfairchild July 6 2003, 10:38:24 UTC

Oh, welcome! Really liked this. The irony of that line makes me wince every time I watch the wrestling scene. Nicely done.

-R

fictionbya July 8 2003, 21:28:46 UTC

Thanks for welcome :-) I didn't notice that line until something like my third or fourth viewing of that episode. This show messes with my mind, heh.

actizera July 7 2003, 17:31:17 UTC

Ooooh, I love it! And also: ouch! You've done a great job of conveying the enormity of the betrayal that Beecher's feeling at this point.

Welcome to the group! : )

fictionbya July 8 2003, 21:31:57 UTC

Thank you much :-)

lisacali July 8 2003, 06:48:53 UTC

Love that last line! You know nothing that happened in the gym can compare to Toby's internal pain, and this is a wonderful illustration of that.

Welcome!

fictionbya July 8 2003, 21:34:35 UTC

Thanks for the feedback and the welcome! :)