HT100#challenge 13: double down - shakedown

Jun 28, 2003 15:40

Ok, here's a second one, still in Apologies universe. I read about the coughing stuff in a book written by a prisoner, two weeks ago. Dedicated to Rifka. I hope she'll like it."Shakedown!" The voice startles me; I nearly fall off the bed, don't even know what time it is ( Read more... )

w: alinewrites, ch 013 double down

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actizera June 28 2003, 15:08:34 UTC
Wow, Aline, this is really intense! I love the twist at the end, when you find out what's *really* going on.

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tobyfan June 29 2003, 06:34:58 UTC
Very clever and surprising. *g*

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Re: alinewrites June 29 2003, 06:41:12 UTC
Thank you! I had fun writing it -even if it's not very funny.

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