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HT100 Challenge #13: Double Down

Jun 27, 2003 15:43

This is carried on from challenge #11. As the stranger pushed him against the wall, Toby pretended the hand sliding down the front of his pants was Chris', the teeth biting his neck were Chris', the low voice ( Read more... )

ch 013 double down, w: lisacali

Comments 12

alinewrites June 27 2003, 22:25:48 UTC

"It's not working like this, either, Chris." And Toby walked away, heartsick, not sure if he'd ever be back."

This one just broke my heart. Please, give us more! It's a wonderful story... I want to know how it ends!

lisacali June 28 2003, 13:01:00 UTC

Thanks Aline. I just don't know about a whole story, though. Maybe I'll mess around with it after I get my LW done...lord, I've barely started that!

Re: alinewrites June 28 2003, 13:03:40 UTC

Maybe not a whole story, but drabbles from time to time would be just fine!
Good luck with your LW!!

lisacali June 29 2003, 22:01:48 UTC

This evening at work I got a rough draft of something going in my head. Will probably write it up in the next few weeks. But tonight I'm working on that LW!

tobyfan June 28 2003, 07:11:18 UTC

Toby smiled. "Seems to be happening right now."

Hee. Sounds like Toby. I like how you let us see his thoughts; that he really is struggling with his feelings but decides to be a prick to protect himself. Poor baby. *sniff*

lisacali June 28 2003, 13:02:57 UTC

I had a different version, with him getting kind of shmoopy, but I like this better. :) Thanks, Anne.

rowanfairchild June 28 2003, 14:02:06 UTC

Boy, you just live to hurt us with this universe, don't'cha? Getting this story one drabble at a time might actually kill me. Gah! *g*

lisacali June 29 2003, 22:04:58 UTC

Getting this story one drabble at a time might actually kill me.

Oh, sorry about that. *g* I'm having so much fun with this. As long as it takes me to write an actual story, I think I've found my calling!

actizera June 28 2003, 15:13:42 UTC

*sniff* Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

Once again, brilliantly done, and once again, you're killing me here! It's so heartbreaking! Chris is such a big jerk! I want to smack him around! Who does he think he is, Brian Kinney? And poor Toby!

OK, I just needed to get that out of my system, thanks. LOL. I eagerly await anything you write in this universe in the future, even though I know it's gonna hurt. *g*

lisacali June 29 2003, 22:07:36 UTC

Who does he think he is, Brian Kinney?

I know, I was thinking the same thing myself! *g*
Thanks, A. hopefully will have something else soon...and, yep, I think it's gonna hurt.

hypertwink June 28 2003, 20:08:58 UTC

I want more =)

lisacali June 29 2003, 22:08:56 UTC

Oh, that's the best thing to hear! Thank you! I'll probably post more to my LJ in the hopefully not-too-distant future.