HT100 Flash Fiction Challenge #10 - Seven Deadly Sins: Forbidden places

[mazephoenix]

The sin is lust

Comments

[drsquidlove]

Sweet!

I don't have time to read right now; I'm not reading anything until I catch up on other stuff, but I couldn't pass this.

“Dear Penthouse..”

...yeah exactly...

I like that Chris is interested in Angus as an unspoiled Toby. That's a little sad and disturbingly hot. I can't help loving that Chris fucked Angus again without Toby around, kept it secret.

But what I really love here is the notion that Chris has to spoil everything in Toby's life, even if it's not in violent ways.

S.

[mazephoenix]

I'm honored you took time to read this.
Yeah, I think even if Chris would try not to get violent he'd still mess poor Toby's life up.
I kinda love the idea of him and Angus, because it's so very, very wrong.
Thank you.

[vanillalime]

I think I should make it clear that none of us came up with this warped idea. :D It originated from a brief mention in this story:

http://hardtime100.livejournal.com/126237.html

... which is an awesome little fic told from Angus's POV. I highly recommend checking it out when you get a chance.

[mazephoenix]

Yes. Should have mentioned that.

[iskra667]

That was just so good! The brothers holding each other's hands, then the awkward justifications :)

[mazephoenix]

Thank you, glad you liked that. Yes, that's not a topic for family dinners.

[vanillalime]

Nice! And, hey, if Keller can seduce a 70-year-old nun.... anything is possible.

I think the moral of this story is that no Beecher should touch a drop of alcohol, ever. ;)

He let Keller fuck him once more, but they were alone so it was only a small sin.

LOL at the "justification"--sounds like Angus is a lot like Toby.

[mazephoenix]

Exactly. Thank you.