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HT100 #13-Double Down: Reprisal

Jun 27, 2003 14:07

Wheeeee another happy fun drabble! This takes place during Gray Matter, between Beecher’s conversation with the FBI and the attempted shanking.

Also: Thanks to maverick4oz for the icon! : )I watched him eat today, and his eyes were blank and cold like a shark’s. Funny I never noticed it before, but a lot of things suddenly made sense when I realized how ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

rileyc June 27 2003, 14:14:47 UTC

*owwwww*

That is a frighteningly dead on Toby voice there. I can completely believe him thinking this.

R, in dire need of happy fic though

lisacali June 27 2003, 14:35:24 UTC

He’s a master at masquerading as a human being.

Great line! Makes me feel for both of them, as this whole story does.

And how you say *like* a creature with deep feelings, just perfect.

Really divides my feelings for Toby...on the one hand, I ache at the thought that he really believed this bullshit, and what it did to him. On the other hand, I wanna smack him 'cuz he really believed this bullshit, and what it did to Chris!

That closing line is just a killer!

alinewrites June 27 2003, 22:28:50 UTC

Perfect, mav! You show the conflict perfectly. And how confused Toby gets. I always thought him shanking Keller was more about the guys he'd killed (and fucked) than about Gary.

"He’s a master at masquerading as a human being" Wonderful sentence!!!

maverick4oz June 28 2003, 10:15:34 UTC

Perfect, mav! You show the conflict perfectly

Why yes, Aline it is perfect. However I cannot take credit for Actizera's brillance. The two of us do on occasion share the same brain, but this amazing little drabble is all hers. LOL Besides, I would *never* write anything so dark and twisted as this. ;-)

Re: alinewrites June 28 2003, 10:17:48 UTC

Yeah, of course you wouldn't! Sorry for the confusion, but with the heat here AND the cat constantly playing on my keyboard, I'm about to lose my mind!

tobyfan June 28 2003, 07:01:56 UTC

Oooh. Yes. Very nice.

I have a thing for AngryVengeful Beecher and this is wonderfully executed.

rowanfairchild June 28 2003, 14:06:19 UTC

Well! Isn't this just near 'bout perfect! Yep, yep, yep... Dead-on Tobyvoice, A, this really captures where they were during that period of time. And yeah, that last line is a beaut.