Comments | hardtime100: HT100 Challenge Fic #67: Be Still My Heart

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HT100 Challenge Fic #67: Be Still My Heart

Feb 26, 2013 13:24

Title: Straight Through My Heart
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Gary Beecher falls in love.
Notes: Takes place in an AU 'verse me and my writing partner have begun. All will become clear.

( Straight Through My Heart )

w: sydpenguinbunny, flashfic ch 067 my heart, flashfiction

Comments 8

suespur February 26 2013, 22:40:28 UTC

Ooooh, very interesting!

sydpenguinbunny February 28 2013, 11:32:59 UTC

Thank you :D Lovely icon ^_^

chaosprincess21 February 26 2013, 23:13:26 UTC

Ahhhh, Syd! :D Awkward Gary is perfect. And the awkward conversation about his finger is hilarious!

sydpenguinbunny February 28 2013, 11:34:04 UTC

:D Poor Gary is ten levels of awkward. :P

ozsaur March 2 2013, 15:39:08 UTC

Gary! I want to give him a hug. Poor kid. Very cool ending!

sydpenguinbunny March 2 2013, 15:42:38 UTC

Thank you! :D Now, admittedly I wrote this before I knew Hank was really dead (for some reason I thought I'd been spoiled to the contrary... but now I've seen up through "Cuts Like a Knife" so, alas, poor Hank) and got spoilered that Carrie dies.... So Jewel's info on her parents might be her lying to not appear depressing, or she's talking about her foster parents. One of those :D

ozsaur March 2 2013, 17:40:43 UTC

I'm so sorry you keep getting spoiled. But it's an older show and it's hard not to stumble across spoilers while browsing around.

I love the idea of Gary and Jewel, but good lord, Toby would totally wig out if he finds out!

sydpenguinbunny March 2 2013, 17:49:31 UTC

I should probably learn my lesson about Oz wiki haha considering the layout where you see "reason/cause" first thing :P ah well.

Oohhh yes. I do have plans to continue this and Toby is going to have kittens when he finds out :D