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HT100 Challenge #190 - Haiku

Apr 23, 2012 22:47

A ring of gold hair
To remember Cyril by
It will not grow back

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Comments 8

franzi1981 April 24 2012, 06:18:38 UTC

;(

ellu_ellu April 24 2012, 06:20:35 UTC

Alas, it is but the scalp shrinking as it decomposes...

mswriter07 April 25 2012, 12:47:34 UTC

When I read this I wanted to cry a bit or maybe sob as I got to thinking of all those scenes. My chin did a little wobble as I read like it was getting ready for the waterworks. This was really good for such a small piece of writing. :)

ellu_ellu April 25 2012, 13:46:52 UTC

My sadistic pleasure ;)

catheights April 26 2012, 22:30:35 UTC

*sniff* This made me ache. Nice job!

ellu_ellu May 1 2012, 00:41:42 UTC

*virtual tissue*

ozsaur April 30 2012, 23:31:41 UTC

Ouch! So sad!

ellu_ellu May 1 2012, 00:43:44 UTC

i can imagine, if i had to be shaved bald & it will never grow back!DX