Comments | hardtime100: Challenge # 185: Fruit Cake

mswriter07 in hardtime100

Challenge # 185: Fruit Cake

Dec 07, 2011 03:18

Adebisi came out of his pod screaming and waving a half opened package with fruit cake flying all over. His eyes scanned the quad and yelled, “Who the fuck thinks this is a proper present? I will find out who sent this.” He readjusted his headphones and went back inside his pod after giving them the evil eye.

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ch 185 fruit cake, w: mswriter07

Comments 8

cmk418 December 7 2011, 13:14:39 UTC

Very funny. I love the initial visual of Adebisi coming out of his pod.

mswriter07 December 7 2011, 21:10:12 UTC

Thanks! I saw it and thought I'd try it out. Glad it worked. :)

ellu_ellu December 7 2011, 23:28:12 UTC

fruitcake for dinner, yummy...

mswriter07 December 7 2011, 23:39:38 UTC

hahaha...how's your drawing going? Still expecting a copy. lol. :)

jean_c_pepper December 8 2011, 02:57:52 UTC

This was wonderfully cute! Adebisi is so crazy, he's almost a caricature and therefore fun to write.

mswriter07 December 8 2011, 03:01:59 UTC

yes he is! Glad you enjoyed! :)

ozsaur December 8 2011, 22:59:17 UTC

LOL

Wonderful visual of Adebisi. And fun!

mswriter07 December 9 2011, 06:30:24 UTC

Thanks. I stepped very far outside my box...lol. It was fun writing. :)