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HT 100 Drabble #171: Outsider POV

Sep 11, 2011 14:57

Title: Full Circle
Characters: The Ortolanis
Time Frame: Season 1, Episode 2

It was the climb to the top. It the business, the game - money, power, the birth of a son. Burying your son...

He approached his wife gingerly as she addressed the envelope to her favorite brother - the only one she had left. On their last visit, Dino had, instead of butting ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

murielle September 12 2011, 21:01:13 UTC

Nice take on the first of many tragic moments in the series.

ellu_ellu September 12 2011, 22:06:50 UTC

And there's so much more to come >:D
Thanks for reading.

neonsharpie September 14 2011, 03:40:26 UTC

-resurfacing from school and work to comment- I've always liked Maria-centered drabbles. She's a character we have so much to learn about that we'll never get to see. Well done.

ellu_ellu September 14 2011, 06:49:01 UTC

yeah you're back!XD

now if you can beta my new entries and send me the rest of the deleted scene cuz cuz i hope (however small the chance) to have the Evil Eye fic done by Halloween and maybe a Joey drabble or flashfic...

Anyways, glad you likey.

neonsharpie September 14 2011, 16:58:49 UTC

My video compression software trial expired, so I have to find another program to download. I've been trying to squeeze in a paragraph or two of your fic whenever I can, which is to say not very often, but hopefully that'll change as the semester progresses.

ellu_ellu September 14 2011, 23:50:26 UTC

Just in case you haven't noticed, updates are now custom-flocked in my journal. Only you and cmk should see it. You two can critique (and debate) through the comments. I'm also trying to squeeze in a paragraph or two whenever I'm not busy with school/work or writer's block. ;)