HT Challenge 176 Eight Hard Years- Title: A Study in Contrasts

[michele659]

Comments

[cmk418]

I love how you manage to boil their relationship down to just a few words. And that last line really packs a punch. Nicely done!

[michele659]

Thank you so much for reading and for your comments! I'm glad you liked the last line;it was hard for me to write it but I thought it would probably be accurate.

[neonsharpie]

Excellent use of imagery, I especially like the description of Miguel tasting of sandalwood and talc. That last line shows that sharp reality that is Oz, you have to be discreet about your feelings or they'll be perceived as a weakness.

[michele659]

Thank you very much for reading and your feedback!
Miguel always looked like his skin would taste delicious :).
I'm happy to know the last line worked. It did hurt to write,but I thought it would be accurate,at least in their view.

[mswriter07]

Intense and sums up a lot of relationships in general. Thank you for posting. Now off to imagine how Ryan tastes...lol. :)

[michele659]

Thank you for reading and for your comments!
Mmm-I bet Ryan tastes good. :)