HT100 Challenge #11 - One To Grow On: Enigma

[frooshoo]

Okay, I didn’t post last week, and I am desperately behind with my feedback, so to all the authors that have posted I’m sorry about that, the good news, and this is a surprise, I didn’t go over with the wordage this time, actually I’m under

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[actizera]

Well, what do you know? You happened to pick what I think is my favorite drabble of yours to continue! So thanks! LOL

You just *know* this is exactly the sort of thing that was going through Chris's head sometimes. I mean, really, being in love with Beecher can't be easy, especially for someone like Chris. And this:

just what I needed, a walking talking conscience.

Awesome line! Love it!

[frooshoo]

Thank you so much A.!! You know I've felt kind of blocked lately, but I wrote this in like 5 minutes, I figured that that one was the easiest to continue, Chris just sitting there looking at him, all these things running through his mind, sometimes I wonder what he is thinking when he is staring at him.

That line, for some reason when I thought of Toby it just kind of popped into my head*g*

Thanks again!

[maverick4oz]

Why couldn’t I have fallen for some brainless bastard that I could wrap around my finger, or more importantly, someone who would just wrap his mouth around my dick, swallow, and that would be it

Because you wouldn't have fallen for that brainless bastard. Sure you would have let him suck your dick, but it's all those things about Toby that drive you crazy that keep you coming back.

Oh wait, maybe he wasn't asking me. LOL

This is great Danielle, you've got me talking to your muses.

[frooshoo]

Mav, please continue to talk to the muses, if they inspire you, mine seem to coming and going like the tide.*g*

I'm so glad you liked this, I'm telling you, it's better when I work in spurts, too much thought and I would have never had gotten it out.

Danielle

[lisacali]

Poor Chris, he really just had no idea, did he? As much as he loved Toby, you know he had to have these kind of thoughts...often! Thanks for giving them such a true voice, Danielle.

[frooshoo]

You're welcome, you know Toby is a thinker, but I always wondered what was going through Chris' mind when he looked at him.

[rileyc]

Did I comment on the first one? No, probably not. So -- Yeah, I like that, Chris wanting to know what's going through Toby's mind, watching his face for any clue, hoping he might be one of the things Toby thinks about, wanting to matter enough to warrant some thought.

And the proof of that in your follow up is perfect, and so Toby, wanting Chris and yet wishing it wasn't Chris, wishing it was someone he could just walk away from. And, you know, he probably would turn that around in his head so it's something bad, part of his 'curse.'

[rowanfairchild]

Oh, nice follow up, Danielle! Some very cool turns of phrase, Chris-like thinking. And I'm so glad to hear you're not blocked anymore! Hopefully I'll follow you!
-R

[frooshoo]

Thanks Rowan!! I've been blocked, but like I said, these short spurts work out well for me. And I love that you liked the turn of phrase, I have to say, I love that expression.

Danielle