HT Flashfiction Challenge #57: Cha-cha-cha-changes!

[levitatethis]

Title: No Fixed Address
Prompt #57: Cha-cha-cha-changes!
Rated: R
Word Count: 2, 044 (approx)
Characters: Keller/Beecher, Sister Pete, Schillinger, OC
Summary: Keller's life changes direction, time and time again.
Warning: Some sexual imagery.
A/N: This is a different take on POV than I usually use (guess the prompt applied to more than the

Comments

[luci_2]

'In life I was death. In death I live forever in a select, protected corner of Toby’s mind '
Yes, I hope he will haunt Toby till the day he dies.

'I want, can’t have-so no one else can either'
Perfect look into S. 4.

I have to stop quoting favorite parts or I will quote the whole fic.
Your understanding of my favorite boy, Keller, always amazes me.
And your writing floors me, as usual.

[levitatethis]

Oh yeah, Keller will haunt Toby his whole life. You don't have a relationship like theirs without scars (good and bad).

So glad you like this. Going with the first person pov was a nice change of pace, but it also made getting into Keller's had all the more trippy :-)

Thank you!

[ozsaur]

Very intense. Using first person POV is a brave choice, but I think you did very well with it. You really understand Chris.

[levitatethis]

Thank you! I knew that taking on first person POV with this fic could result in epic failure on my part -- so I'm glad to hear you felt I captured who Chris is.

[aletter2elise]

I loved that u used song lyrics as quotes for Kellers thoughts. This is definatly Kellers mind! Too many good lines to comment on, but i must say u did an excellent job expressing how Keller truely feels about love.....and the word "Love" means Tobias Beecher.

Great job! :)

[levitatethis]

Thank you! Sometimes there are some songs that just seem to capture exactly what I think a character is feeling and I wanted to use that to show a certain progression in Keller's mindset over the years at different points in his life -- and the enormity of what Toby comes to mean to him.