168 - hacks

[natlet]

I fail at drabbles.
200ish words
Mineo <3

Comments

[severina2001]

Hah, love it. Now there's a side of Mineo we don't often see. Great characterization, and I love the last line.

[natlet]

Hee! Thanks! I sort of love the idea of Mineo as the reluctant and grumpy social compass of the locker room. (I don't know, I can't explain what goes on in my head.)

(Also holy shit you are fast for almost 4 in the morning!)

[severina2001]

I love your take on all of the secondary characters. You have a real knack for getting into their heads.

(trillingstar and I have been up late doing our own writing. Lucky us, because it meant we got to see this hot off the presses. :) )

[trillingstar]

This is awesome. I love the outsider POV, Mineo's distaste, his rationale. Totally in character.

[natlet]

(Again with the omg fast!)

Whee glad you liked thank you! :D

I'm really starting to love the Mineo who's grumping around up in my head.

[lisacali]

I love to see minor characters get their moment - great drabble!

[natlet]

Thank you! Minor characters are so much more fun for me, heh. All... sketchy! All this room to expand and theorize!

[cmk418]

This made me laugh. I loved the straight-laced Mineo mentally rolling his eyes at the soap opera going on around him. And Tim pouting. And Murphy being Murphy.

Really well done!

[natlet]

Wheee thank you!

Mineo just cracks me up. He's so completely ABOVE IT ALL, but I can totally see him stepping in when the Great McManus Soap Opera invades his little bubble of zen.

[ozsaur]

McManus having a hissy fit never gets old-- except for maybe Mineo! *g* Great outsider POV. Wonderful drabble.