HT100 FlashFic Challenge #11: Amnesty -- "Patience"

[severina2001]

Title: Patience
Prompt: 11 - Amnesty (Challenge #10: Seven Deadly Sins)
Character/Pairing: Beecher/Keller
Timeframe: Early S4
Authors Notes: First Sentence Prompt from ozsaur. This sentence somehow led me to "lust". Well, kinda. *shrugs*
Word Count: 1712

Comments

[trillingstar]

Squeeee! Love Keller's interaction with Ryan. Love this: Sometimes he thinks he spends his whole life waiting for Toby. Love this: “Show me you like the way I taste,” Toby growls, and Chris lets himself be pushed to his knees.

Well worth the wait! :)

[severina2001]

How did I not see these comments? Sorry for the late response. Ryan, I tend to fall into 'lowest common denominator mode' - the trope thing - but he IS fun to write. Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

[ozsaur]

Ohhhh, you're getting pretty porny there, little lady. *g*

Really enjoyed this. Loved the bit with Ryan. Love Toby being all growly.

[severina2001]

Sorry for the late response, did not see these comments!

Thanks so much, hon. Porny, HAH. But yes, I do like a growly Toby. :D

[lisacali]

Great story! Love the dialogue, Chris knowing exactly what Toby is going through and the haggling between Chris and Ryan.

[severina2001]

Sorry for the late response, did not see these comments!

Thank you so much, esp. in regard to the dialogue. :)