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HT100 - Challenge #165:Urban Dictionary - 'Colombian Necktie'

Feb 17, 2010 10:28

The inmates watched the body being carried out, a bloom of red high on the sheet covering the deceased ( Read more... )

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trillingstar February 17 2010, 21:36:41 UTC

Dude, Kenny got it in one! That is some messed up shit (and I love that *he* is delighted). Love Groves' thoughts added to the mix. Well done on such a frankly distasteful topic.

lisacali February 25 2010, 05:39:19 UTC

and I love that *he* is delighted).

Thanks! Yeah, I was thinking about his reaction to...oh shit can't remember his name, that guy that murdered the family and taped it.

cmk418 February 17 2010, 23:46:12 UTC

Nicely done! Very bleak and I love Groves' observation at the end.

lisacali February 25 2010, 05:40:16 UTC

I love Groves' observation at the end.

Thanks - that was what I wrote first.

numenora February 18 2010, 04:58:27 UTC

This is so Oz and you got the character voices down perfectly. Nice job, honey. :D

lisacali February 25 2010, 05:40:54 UTC

Nice job, honey.

Thank you!

ozsaur February 18 2010, 20:29:34 UTC

Whoa! Gruesome! You have Kenny's attitude down perfectly. Love Groves at the end.

lisacali February 25 2010, 05:43:27 UTC

Whoa! Gruesome!

I know, huh! When I saw that tat I thought, wow, that would have been a perfect death for 'Oz'! And then this challenge came along - thanks!

severina2001 February 20 2010, 06:08:46 UTC

Wow, now this is perfect characterization. Kenny and Groves to a T! Bravo!

lisacali February 25 2010, 05:45:51 UTC

Kenny and Groves to a T! Bravo!

Thank you! I've been watching season one again and Groves has always been a fav, so I was glad to have a chance to write him!