Comments | hardtime100: HT100 #9-workout: a tribute to Bob Dylan :)

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HT100 #9-workout: a tribute to Bob Dylan :)

Jun 03, 2003 20:22

Ok, so I wanted to post something, anything, and that's all I managed to work, so Maverick4oz, please, don't read it. It's not even that good.I watch him from the door as I'm walking out ( Read more... )

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snarkhunt June 3 2003, 14:15:17 UTC

Such sadness, Aline. Well done on conveying the distance he's feeling.

Re: alinewrites June 3 2003, 14:27:38 UTC

thank you, Eliza...I'm not very happy with that one, but whatever I tried to write brought me back to the same thing, so... I don't think Toby ever feels that distant in the series, though.

maverick4oz June 3 2003, 17:57:11 UTC

Ok, so why can't I read this? Because it's very good. Heartbreaking but good. And please don't ever stop yourself from posting because of me.

You can break my heart anytime. :-)

Thanks Aline.

Re: alinewrites June 4 2003, 00:16:40 UTC

Aw, thank you for the sweet feed-back, Mav... But I felt sad just writing it!