HT100 FlashFic Challenge #08: Bait & Switch -- "Simple Pleasures"

[severina2001]

Title: Simple Pleasures
Prompt: 08: Bait & Switch (something is not as it appears)
Authors Notes: When I was whining about The Oz Fic That Hates Me, ozsaur tried to kickstart me on something else by giving me the opening line in this fic. This is what happened.
Word Count: 1134

Comments

[ozsaur]

I love what you did with that line! I'm just grinning! Even when they lose, they win - and vice versa. Chris is going to pay for not playing fair. I bet he's back doing his own laundry before the month is out. *g*

I really like your humor!

[severina2001]

Aww, I'm glad you liked it. I tried!

[katej]

Loooove this. i love every line. i'm so happy with how you characterized Toby here. So many people always have him go apeshit at the suggestion of being a prag but i like that he sort of just shrugs it off here because he knows the truth.

and i love the scene of toby shoving chris into the wall. hot. i've always wanted to see that. ;p

[severina2001]

Hmmm. Well, I think Toby's willing to go along with whatever Ryan says because HE knows he's only doing the laundry to get back at Keller. But I also think that as long as Chris doesn't use any of Toby's hot-button words, like prag or bitch, Toby would happily play house anyway. ;)

i love the scene of toby shoving chris into the wall. hot. i've always wanted to see that. ;p

Mmmm, I know what you mean! ;)

[roguemarch]

Hahaha, this is why Toby loves doing Chris laundry. I have the suspicion that Said needs to hear every single kinky detail of Toby and Chris sex life, that would serve him well for being so damn 'holier than everybody'.

Love your fics, sorry it took me so long to comm on them, but you know, RL and all...

[severina2001]

BWaha! And then Said's lying in his bunk at night, trying desperately to pray because he's gettin' all hot and bothered by those images in his head... ;)

Thanks so much. Hope things are going great in your non-online life! :D