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Ht100 Challenge #152: To The Victor -- ... Go The Spoils

Oct 02, 2009 09:40

Title: ... Go The Spoils
Prompt: 152 - To The Victor
Timeframe: Season Three
Word Count: 100

( ...Go The Spoils )

w: severina2001, ch 152 to the victors

Comments 6

lisacali October 3 2009, 16:38:25 UTC

Oh, heartclench. Especially with knowing all the shit to come.

I've just finished reading your last few batches of drabbles, and I've enjoyed them all. You capture the show so well, and the impact of what you write seems like so much more than just 100 words were used. You've helped refresh my love for Oz. Thank you.

severina2001 October 4 2009, 21:40:06 UTC

Wow, thank you very much. I always loved writing drabbles, and it's been wonderful getting my muse back again. Thank you!

luci_2 October 3 2009, 22:58:43 UTC

Heart-wrenching. He fought so much for it and it was such a short-time victory.

severina2001 October 4 2009, 21:40:56 UTC

He really did do everything Toby asked. At least he got his Toby for awhile...

ozsaur October 4 2009, 03:07:40 UTC

Keller sabotages himself, then works his ass off to make it back to ground zero - again and again. I think that is my ultimate fascination with him, that he fucks up and somehow finds a way to redeem himself. That's why his canon death breaks my heart-- he'll never be able to redeem himself. I think you've captured an essential aspect of Keller's character in this drabble.

severina2001 October 4 2009, 21:42:44 UTC

Oh wow, yes, exactly. So many times he does it to himself (though to be honest, the S4 breakup debacle is on Toby) but he's able to work his way back to Toby's good graces, and like you said, after his death he can never do that. And you KNOW Toby would've forgiven him. *sigh*

Thank you!