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Hardtime100 Challenge #7: Change Canon "Others"

May 26, 2003 23:41

Yeah, i know. I'm a week late, here. But i kind of feel like i'm dominating this forum lately, so i'm trying to keep my entries to a minimum. Enjoy... unless you're against season 6. Then you might just want to mosey on over to greener pastures.He ripped off the tape and straddled him. Leaning in, Chris pressed his lips against Toby's, ( Read more... )

ch 007 change canon, w: serialkeller

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snarkhunt May 26 2003, 21:03:08 UTC

"Is this how you killed the others?"
Was it possible to choke on someone else's words?

You just took my breath away. This. Is. Awesome.

serialkeller May 27 2003, 18:27:13 UTC

*blush* thanks. I loved the tension in this scene, i figured it wouldn't be long before i started dabbling with it.

alinewrites May 26 2003, 21:11:03 UTC

I agree with Eliza. It's excellent! BTW, how did he kill the others? Another thing we'll never know!

serialkeller May 27 2003, 18:26:10 UTC

Yeah, i mean we know about one of them, thanks to Spanky, but he was never really clear on the others. Given his fondness for breaking necks, though, i'd assume both neck breakage and dick suckage could have been involved... 'course that's a topic for a whole 'nother challenge. Hehe.
Glad it met with approval, i have to admit it's one of my favourites.

tobyfan May 27 2003, 04:44:58 UTC

Ooooh! Ooooh! Oooooh!

Loved it!

catheights May 27 2003, 09:19:02 UTC

"Is this how you killed the others?"

Damn! I think my jaw just hit the floor. Wow. Talk about creating a heck of an impact in a few words. Fantasic writing.

serialkeller May 27 2003, 18:30:31 UTC

It's really great to get so many responses from fellow writers. It makes me smile just to see that other people enjoy it, especially when i admire their writing (nudge). Thanks so much for the fb.

callmeri June 3 2003, 08:45:07 UTC

He shoved that thought away with a thousand other painful pasts.

Man, that's a *great* effin' line. Actually, there's so many of them here: remembering when their kisses used to mean something; when they were affirmations of love, not loyalty, and Was it possible to choke on someone else's words? and a last aching look at Beecher.

Alright, alright, the whole thing is just, like, perfect. Okay? :)