Comments | hardtime100: HT100 Challenge #133: Kissing -- Kiss of Death

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HT100 Challenge #133: Kissing -- Kiss of Death

Sep 07, 2009 19:58

Title: Kiss of Death
Prompt: 133 - Kissing
Word Count: 100

( Kiss of Death )

w: severina2001, ch 133 kissing!

Comments 7

levitatethis September 8 2009, 17:03:04 UTC

This drabble perfectly captures one of the things I love about the show -- the subject matter can be both serious and funny. The guys are talking about something that is dark but then the conversation takes this amusing turn at the end because you just know Ryan is not going to be pleased at that news.

severina2001 September 9 2009, 11:28:57 UTC

Thank you very much! I love Oz's dark humour.

ozsaur September 8 2009, 20:35:50 UTC

I have to admit, I laughed out loud. You captured that wonderful Oz combination of grim and amusing. Nicely done!

Oh, and give Megford one week. *g*

severina2001 September 9 2009, 11:30:10 UTC

Woo! That's awesome, I'm so glad it got a laugh from you. :)

And hey, a whole week? It must be taking Ryan longer to set this one up. ;)

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severina2001 September 9 2009, 11:30:33 UTC

Thanks very much. :)

luci_2 September 9 2009, 23:16:06 UTC

Ryan is so predictable, where it concerns Gloria.
I can see them, sitting at the quad tables, little Andy trying to fit in. Perfect.

severina2001 September 11 2009, 01:17:29 UTC

So true. I gotta admit, I love that Ryan takes care of Patrick Keenan. YES.

I liked fitting Andy into the equation. Trying to be part of the gang, and never knowing that he's just a pawn.