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Ht100 Challenge #94: Mirror Image -- Reflections

Aug 27, 2009 08:35

Title: Reflections
Prompt: 94 - Mirror Image
Timeframe: Season Three
Word Count: 100

( Reflections )

w: severina2001, ch 094 mirror image

Comments 6

levitatethis August 27 2009, 13:39:39 UTC

Very nice paralleling of these two guys. You have one who is constantly searching for who he really is, what it means, who he wants to be, what he's become. You have another who knows all too well who he is, what he's capable of, what/who he wants.

severina2001 August 28 2009, 01:32:42 UTC

Thank you very much. I kept coming back to Toby so aggressively brushing his teeth at the beginning of S3, and it just went from there.

luci_2 August 28 2009, 00:04:12 UTC

How different : Toby looking to find something, Chris avoiding his image and what's behind it.
Excellent.

severina2001 August 28 2009, 01:33:18 UTC

Thank you. Funny what the image of Toby brushing his teeth can start in my head!

ozsaur August 28 2009, 00:32:45 UTC

Have I mentioned lately how impressed I am that you are steadily moving along with your goal of writing a drabble for every challenge? I admire what you are doing, but I'm in awe that you have maintained a high quality with each drabble. Not a single one below excellent.

severina2001 August 28 2009, 01:31:41 UTC

Wow. Thank you SO much. I am having such a fun time here. Thank you -- and everyone on the comm and everyone who's reached out to me personally -- for being so welcoming.

I still need to get started with the flashfiction prompts though. I'm stalled at #1 because the prompt is "forgiveness" and I feel like I need to write Post Season 6 and 87658 words. I need to find a way around that prompt!