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HT100 Challenge #86: Somebody's Watching You -- Line of Sight

Aug 26, 2009 09:53

Title: Line of Sight
Prompt: 86 - Somebody's Watching You
Timeframe: Season Four
Authors Note: I consider this a sequel to "PDA", which was written for Prompt #43 - "I Spy". In PDA, Busmalis and Rebadow watch Beecher and Keller talking in their cell.
Word Count: 100

( Line of Sight )

ch 086 somebody's watching you, w: severina2001

Comments 6

luci_2 August 26 2009, 23:18:43 UTC

I' m so addicted to your drabbles.*g*

' Behind him, he can sense the ebb and flow of Em City’s late afternoon -- the restless thump of many hearts eager for one last chat or hit or barbed word before they are sealed in their pods for the night'
Such a perfect description of the quad and its inhabitants.

Chris has a sixth sense.

severina2001 August 27 2009, 00:56:05 UTC

I' m so addicted to your drabbles.*g*

Awww, thank you! Each and every comment means so much to me. I'm so grateful and pleased that you like them!

Chris is so attuned to sex that he can tell when someone hasn't had it. ;)

Line of Sight pbwhisperer August 27 2009, 00:52:29 UTC

Heh, Chris' sixth sense is not infallible; he was surprised Sister Pete had been married! Love how you capture the flavor of the quad in Em City. (:

Re: Line of Sight severina2001 August 27 2009, 00:54:36 UTC

hehe Yeah, but I'm guessing he knew she wasn't a virgin. ;) Thanks so much for reading and commenting. :)

ozsaur August 27 2009, 18:29:17 UTC

Yeah, Chris does have a sixth sense about these things. Such a tease, too.

severina2001 August 28 2009, 02:16:37 UTC

Yeeeeah. *happy sigh*

Erm. *tucks Chris-tease thoughts into pocket*