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HT100 Challenge #13: Double Down -- Adventurous

Aug 08, 2009 21:35

Title: Adventurous
Prompt: 13 - Double Down
Word Count: 200

( Adventurous )

w: severina2001, ch 013 double down

Comments 12

suespur August 9 2009, 15:43:40 UTC

Awww, poor Beecher. *g*

severina2001 August 11 2009, 03:06:16 UTC

They give him no credit, man. :)

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severina2001 August 11 2009, 03:08:19 UTC

Thank you! I'm really happy you thought I got the right tone in the dialogue; much appreciated. :)

ozsaur August 11 2009, 14:55:58 UTC

I think Toby has hidden depths. Both of them would be surprised!

Very amusing!

severina2001 August 11 2009, 17:21:39 UTC

I very much agree! Poor boy gets no credit.

trillingstar August 11 2009, 18:31:24 UTC

Hah! What, a bed in a maximum security penitentiary in front of fifty guys (some of them brandishing weapons) isn't unusual enough for Keller and O'Reily? *grins*

nindevotee August 11 2009, 19:18:02 UTC

Here, here! Or the shower in a maximum security penitentiary in front of fifty guys (some of them brandishing weapons) for that matter...

severina2001 August 13 2009, 02:04:43 UTC

Still not unique enough. Now, Sister Pete's office, maybe...

severina2001 August 13 2009, 02:04:03 UTC

Eh, waaaay too many people are having sex in those bunks. It's not... erm... unique. :D

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roguemarch August 12 2009, 21:53:45 UTC

Loved this very much! Beecher is so sweet! Well no, ut you get what I mean

severina2001 August 13 2009, 02:08:57 UTC

Sometimes he's sweet. No, really.

Thank you!