I've read some fic where Keller detaches before he does the deed, so to speak. He's a violent man, I think, and whether or not he actually enjoys breaking *Toby's* bones, he does get some kind of rush from the physicality of the violence. I think he's IN it, very much present, willing to feel everything, buoyant, even. I tried to give a sense of that.
Oh, Toby. A little kitty in a room with a Rottweiler, a German Shepherd and a Doberman. My, my. ;)
He's a violent man, I think, and whether or not he actually enjoys breaking *Toby's* bones, he does get some kind of rush from the physicality of the violence.
Oh, yes, absolutely! You conveyed that very well - great drabble!
This is awesome! I love the rawness and honestly, this scenario was the first thing that came to mind seeing the flash fic challenge. I can just see Keller aroused by reliving the incident. Damn fine writing, too!
this scenario was the first thing that came to mind seeing the flash fic challenge Great minds! Wow, seriously. Me too!! I'm writing that for the flashfic. *eyes you*
Thank you! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. *g*
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Toby hisses better than any little kitty-cat.
I love that!
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I've read some fic where Keller detaches before he does the deed, so to speak. He's a violent man, I think, and whether or not he actually enjoys breaking *Toby's* bones, he does get some kind of rush from the physicality of the violence. I think he's IN it, very much present, willing to feel everything, buoyant, even. I tried to give a sense of that.
Oh, Toby. A little kitty in a room with a Rottweiler, a German Shepherd and a Doberman. My, my. ;)
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Oh, yes, absolutely! You conveyed that very well - great drabble!
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Thank you, I'm so pleased you liked this. *g*
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Awesome, dear!
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Great minds! Wow, seriously. Me too!! I'm writing that for the flashfic. *eyes you*
Thank you! I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. *g*
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