Comments | hardtime100: HT 100 Challenge #149: Sweet, Bitter, Salty, Sour

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HT 100 Challenge #149: Sweet, Bitter, Salty, Sour

May 03, 2009 09:54

Toby couldn’t believe it - a man - *this* man - was coming in his mouth! He tried to get away but Vern was holding tight, keeping Toby’s face impaled on his cock ( Read more... )

ch 149 sweet bitter salty sour, w: lisacali

Comments 10

trillingstar May 3 2009, 21:11:55 UTC

Euuuuuw.

"Oh no, sweetpea, you swallow that. You'll learn to like it."
Perfectly chilling (and so matter of fact!) Vern.

purging acid of his own bile
Great description.

lisacali May 4 2009, 00:04:50 UTC

Perfectly chilling (and so matter of fact!) Vern.

I loved that about Vern - his matter-of-factness - no matter what the hell he was saying!

Thanks for the comments. :)

ozsaur May 4 2009, 04:04:39 UTC

This little snapshot is so vivid - lot of impact in a few words. Very cool drabble.

lisacali May 10 2009, 00:21:15 UTC

Thank you so much!

roguemarch May 5 2009, 07:43:24 UTC

Damn, that's plain nasty.... not the fact of giving a bj, but to have Vern's come in yer mouth! Diack!

Incredible pic! Very good description!

lisacali May 10 2009, 00:21:53 UTC

Thanks you so much for your comments - and yes, "Diack!"

neevebrody May 6 2009, 21:23:32 UTC

Great drabble. I imagine it would be exactly like that for Toby. Your Schillinger is spot on here!

lisacali May 10 2009, 00:22:21 UTC

Thank you!

aguardente May 9 2009, 09:47:34 UTC

Gorgeous. Just freaking gorgeous. Love the last line!

lisacali May 10 2009, 00:22:43 UTC

Wow, thanks!