Comments | hardtime100: HT Challenge #125

cmk418 in hardtime100

HT Challenge #125 - Bite

Sep 01, 2007 13:24

This was literally the first thing that came to mind when I read the prompt. A moment from "A Cock and Balls Story" (Season 4, Episode 1) involving the second attempt at rec time with the gang from solitary. It's told from Claire's POV. 100 words.

( Tim McManus can bite me )

ch 125 bite, w: cmk418

Comments 17

michele659 September 1 2007, 23:37:05 UTC

OMG-That IS the voice of Claire Howell! I can picture it in my head.
Those would be her words and her tone-I love it!
This was really funny( and you see, you were so able to do 100 words)!

cmk418 September 2 2007, 02:27:16 UTC

Yeah, I had to cut it down a little bit, but it wasn't anything too drastic. I'm glad you found it funny.

rustler September 2 2007, 00:30:15 UTC

Seriously, this feels like frighteningly accurate Claire Howell. Nicely done.

cmk418 September 2 2007, 02:28:06 UTC

Thank you. I get a kick out of writing for her character.

lisacali September 2 2007, 02:15:33 UTC

Spot-on perfect! What a fun read!

cmk418 September 2 2007, 02:28:57 UTC

Thanks! I had fun writing it.

catheights September 2 2007, 02:40:46 UTC

Oooh, excellent Claire voice. Awesome drabble!

cmk418 September 2 2007, 07:18:41 UTC

Thank you. It's nice to know when I get the voices right. Glad you liked it.

colleendetroit September 2 2007, 11:34:41 UTC

Great Claire POV! That really sounded like her. Nice job!

cmk418 September 2 2007, 17:02:35 UTC

Thank you. Should I be frightened that she seems so easy to channel?

colleendetroit September 3 2007, 02:05:16 UTC

LOL Perhaps...but really start worrying when you start walking around with a nightstick. ;oD