HT100 Challenge #6 Free For All: Can of Worms

[pirl]

This is a snippet of an idea that wormed into my head ages ago. Figured I could resurrect it for this weeks challenge.Toby peered down at the head perched directly over his lazily beating heart. Chris' hand, which had snaked down between Toby's legs sometime earlier that night, now moved carelessly unaware of its close proximity to sensitive

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[alinewrites]

this is a good question... And very well asked, too. I'd love to have Chris' reaction at that.

[snarkhunt]

Talk about a can of worms! I love how natural the scene is, the position in bed - I *love* that -, and Chris's "For fuck's sake", the whole thing - wonderful scene, Pirl!

[frooshoo]

Oh good golly miss molly:

>>Chris' hand, which had snaked down between Toby's legs sometime earlier that night, now moved carelessly unaware of its close proximity to sensitive areas<<

Fans self, I love that kind of lazy, careless caressing, very nice visual!!

[rowanfairchild]

Mmm, Pirl -- very provocative! I really love the quick, subtle shift from casual to tense, which is such a hallmark of their relationship. Neat!
-R

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[pirl]

That's what always drove me nuts about them- they could turn their emotions on a dime! Hello- public crotch grab turns into the "I'm nobody's bitch" fight? Jesus they're frustrating!

Thanks for the feedback, doll!

[maverick4oz]

How did I miss this one, Miss Pirl? Excellent drabble. However, I only want the answer to that question if you're answering it and not TF. And as always, you're Keller voice is so spot on it's scary.

Great stuff, baby.

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[pirl]

How did I miss this one, Miss Pirl?

Too busy writing some dandy scene where my 2 favorite boys get nice and friendly?

*Maybe* one of these days I'll finish the idea... but ask again in about 2005- I should be caught up with all the other fic by then.

Thanks sweets!