HT100 Challenge #119 - You Took the Words Right Out of my Mouth

Mar 26, 2007 19:57

There are some really nice quotes in the batch, but I went with Jane Austen for this piece. McManus/Murphy. 100 words exactly.

He's a guard. He guards the Queen. )

ch 119 took the words, w: cmk418

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viggofest March 27 2007, 04:19:53 UTC
See, now, "you will always be the only man in myn life, you drunk asshole," are the words that sound familiar to me! ;-)
Nice job!

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cmk418 March 27 2007, 05:05:53 UTC
Always striving for that little bit of realism...

I'm glad you liked it.

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colleendetroit March 27 2007, 06:00:33 UTC
That was great! And it's so funny, because I just saw the episode where Diane calls Tim and he hangs up on her...this goes along perfectly with that.

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cmk418 March 28 2007, 05:16:11 UTC
Thanks. Glad you liked it. I always loved the dialogue between McManus and Sister Pete where she breaks the news to him. It's one of my favorite scenes.

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murielle March 27 2007, 06:25:34 UTC
That brings back all kinds of warm OZzy feelings.

Nice twist on the quote, too. Well done!

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cmk418 March 28 2007, 05:18:00 UTC
Makes me wonder what Murphy's POV on the quote would be.

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murielle March 28 2007, 06:05:06 UTC
Do I hear another drabble coming along?

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cmk418 March 28 2007, 20:12:19 UTC
Well, it really was just me musing, but now that it's been suggested...

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ozsaur March 27 2007, 15:33:45 UTC
This is why I love Sean so much. Nicely done!

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cmk418 March 28 2007, 05:18:46 UTC
Stand by your man, that's our Sean. Glad you liked it.

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mjzjewel March 27 2007, 16:46:38 UTC
awww poor McManus.
This was really funny! I enjoyed it a lot.

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cmk418 March 28 2007, 05:20:18 UTC
He's sweet when he's pathetic, isn't he? Thanks for reading.

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