Hard Time: Free-for-All

May 07, 2003 14:02

Okay, this is something I was fiddling with post-RIS, just so you know the setting ( Read more... )

w: rileyc, ch 006 free-for-all

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lisacali May 7 2003, 22:15:59 UTC
"There had been a time when the slightest touch from Toby would set him on fire. Now, it just grounded and soothed him."

Oh, I like that a lot! Made me all verklempt!

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Re: rileyc May 8 2003, 07:18:13 UTC
Awwww.... You're welcome.

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snarkhunt May 8 2003, 02:29:00 UTC
I love the warmth in this, the edging back towards each other, very nice set-up for CLaK.

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Re: rileyc May 8 2003, 07:17:37 UTC
Thanks. I've tried a couple of times to do something with a pre-CLaK reunion between them, since you know there had to be *something,* but it's never quite come off.

Well, it's hard to top CLaK that way. It was everything the sappiest romantic among us could have hoped for, after all.

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alinewrites May 8 2003, 08:40:06 UTC
"Sorry for what?" he said, turning to look at him. "For telling me?"

Pfff! sometimes this guy really upsets me!

"I couldn't let him betray you, Chris"
yeah! I'd rather do it myself (evil laugh)

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Re: rileyc May 10 2003, 07:28:04 UTC
But that's love Oz style, their own version of a Hallmark card -- "When you care enough to whack someone for love." *g*

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rowanfairchild May 8 2003, 13:41:28 UTC
Oh, the tone of this is just perfect -- and a killer last line.
-R

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Re: rileyc May 8 2003, 13:50:47 UTC
Thank you. Although what does it say that I want Toby to be a bloodthirty little maniac for his fella? :/

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rowanfairchild May 8 2003, 15:02:38 UTC
That you're an Oz fan! *g*

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Re: rileyc May 10 2003, 07:22:00 UTC
I guess it does. *g*

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maverick4oz May 8 2003, 21:41:57 UTC
Damn Rebecca. This is so good. And it feels like such a true glimpse at what might have happened. Glad to see you drabbling again. :-)

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Re: rileyc May 10 2003, 07:21:19 UTC
Well I had this whole scenario imagined but it never got much further than that. Glad this little drabble works, though, thanks.

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