HT100 Challenge #100: Something old

Jun 13, 2006 11:45


This didn't do what I wanted it to *mumbles that it's Toby's fault* but it is exactly 100 words.

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I'm an alcoholic. I've lived with humiliation for years. It has no power over me. I might cry or whine, but I will do nothing about the problem.

"Tobias, you will suck my cock."

For months, I'd protested and begged each time I heard those ( Read more... )

w: blackchaps, ch 100 something old/new

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lisacali June 13 2006, 18:51:28 UTC
Great drabble - powerful. A real defining moment.

For months, I'd protested and begged each time I heard those words, but today, I quit. I broke, and I opened my mouth.

Sad and chilling!

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blackchaps June 14 2006, 18:46:59 UTC
Thanks. (blush)

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doctorevel June 13 2006, 22:28:51 UTC
Really powerful. it shook my soul... I so admire people who can write this way in such a short space.

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blackchaps June 14 2006, 18:49:05 UTC
Thanks. I've wanted to try my hand at first person this summer, so I'm completely relieved that it didn't totally suck. Thanks again!

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foxxcub June 14 2006, 14:32:50 UTC
Damn right he will, LOL. Very nice!

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blackchaps June 14 2006, 18:49:26 UTC
Thanks!

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