HT100 Challenge #89: Turning a new leaf

[rileyc]

Hmm, I actually had something else in mind for this, but it got lost in the oz_magi scramble. *sigh* Oh well, here's something, and since I issued the challenge I'm gonna say it fits just fine. LOL

Returning to "Out 'o Time," S3, and a certain balcony scene, and clocking in at 202 words...

~Fall to Grace~“Keller,” he said as the other man started to

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[pride_of_erin]

Mouth twitching with the sparest of smiles, he nodded back because, hell, the closest taste of Eden he’d ever know might be the touch of Keller’s lips.

GUH. The whole thing was lovely, but that last line was just... guh. And, I choose to believe, so true. *g*

[rileyc]

Aww, thank you, Erin. Weaving in religious imagery is always so tempting with these guys. (Hmm, how much time do I do in Purgatory for that? Or, you know, thinking it's sexy when Elliot makes the sign of the cross on SVU? LOL)

[luci_2]

Ditto. It was all good, but that last line swept me.

[rileyc]

Thanks, Luci.